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Hey, in the part where it says, NOW WHAT?
Try to put something to show the viewer that those things are buttons. Just a recommendation. The little circle character was funny. XD very original.
Author's Response:
thanks, i love constructive criticism. the circle guy is mr pointy due to the fact that he likes to point at things. i wasnt sure about the now what section, but whatever, you will know best and i will update it soon!
thanks
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Funny, and I felt for the last one XP
Author's Response:
That's red buttons for you :D
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"I don't say its ok, but I don't say its not ok."
It was more or less.... Try to put more animation, and action >_> I got kinda bored.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
I definately should have put more effort. I havent put much practise in my flash skill so I'll do better next time =]
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